angels_wept_fb ([info]angels_wept_fb) wrote,
@ 2005-12-17 17:23:00
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Part...4?
Ok, you can leave your feedback here, or, ya know, chew my ass for not updating since may. Either works!

::mwah::

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[info]elizaria
2005-12-18 01:09 am UTC (link)
Awesome to see an update! :)

And this chapter certainly pushed things didn't it. Like the wound - pushing the fact that Xander sometmes have to be touched. Rereading the chapters it becomes very clear that he doesn't get much physical contact. Besides the hug in teh beginning.

And whatever is xander upto in his free time.. anything punishing apprently.

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[info]ex_kyrieane267
2005-12-18 04:27 pm UTC (link)
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked

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[info]betty_m
2005-12-18 01:14 am UTC (link)
Truly a vert moving story. Your Spike characterization seems to be right on the money... love's bitch indeed. Enjoying the series much.

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[info]ex_kyrieane267
2005-12-18 04:27 pm UTC (link)
Thank you, I'm glad you liked!

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[info]darkhavens
2005-12-18 01:42 am UTC (link)
Yay! Protector!Spike is so wonderful. And Xander really needs someone to hug him and pet him and call him... not George. *g*

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[info]ex_kyrieane267
2005-12-18 04:28 pm UTC (link)
*snorts* yeah, calling him George might not be a good idea!

*hugs*

Thanks love!

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[info]authoressnebula
2005-12-18 02:14 am UTC (link)
Oh I love you. I love you love you LOVE YOU!! *sends you smooches that are air smooches 'cause you don't want my germs*

The story all over again like that was wonderful, and I loved the new part. Make me whimper for Xander all over again.

~Nebula

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[info]ex_kyrieane267
2005-12-18 04:29 pm UTC (link)
heeee!

Thanks honey, i'm so very tickled that you liked!

*hugs*

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[info]angelicvampyre
2005-12-18 02:46 am UTC (link)
*humps your leg* YOu updated! Yeah! This is one of the WIPs that I go back and check each week incase I missed an update!

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[info]ex_kyrieane267
2005-12-18 04:30 pm UTC (link)
*glomps*

I'm glad you liked, and hopefully there will be another update soon!

::mwah::

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[info]tempestsreach
2005-12-18 02:48 am UTC (link)
Oh, I'm so pleased to see this being up dated. The 'what happened next' was killing me! *begs* please don't leave it so long next time. This fic has such a promising feeling to it.

*hugs* you and bribes you with chocolate shaped Spikes and Xanders.

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[info]ex_kyrieane267
2005-12-18 04:30 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so very much! Finishing this is on my list of things to do for Winter Break! I'm glad you liked!

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[info]tabaqui
2005-12-18 03:29 am UTC (link)
Yay!!
You came back to this!
I really wanted more but you know....things get crazy!

Lovely stuff, bay-bee. I like how Spike helps him by just *being* - just standing there, or just following along behind.

I wish Xander would...confide a little. But he's so used to being alone...
Lovely stuff, i say!
*smoooch*

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[info]ex_kyrieane267
2005-12-18 04:31 pm UTC (link)
*cuddles*

Thanks bay-beeee! I never meant to abandon this...but yeah, that whole RL thang just kicks my ass!

I'm so glad you liked! thank you!!!

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[info]penne4m
2005-12-18 04:18 am UTC (link)
Yay!! I am so happy to see an update on this. I often wondered what happened next in the story.

My heart bleeds for Xander in this. Spike is just wonderful as his protector. It seems as if the LA crew know more about what Xander needs than the Sunnydale friends. They still haven't been to his place to see the lack of furniture? Are they keeping tabs on im at all?

Thank you, thank you, thank you for updating. Lovely writing, amazing story.

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[info]ex_kyrieane267
2005-12-18 04:45 pm UTC (link)
It seems as if the LA crew know more about what Xander needs than the Sunnydale friends.

Yes! Fantastic! Thank you so much!

*hugs*

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[info]woman_of_
2005-12-18 10:05 am UTC (link)
Hi leaving feedback for part one, just read it at [info]bloodclaim. Wonderful, going off the catch up on everything else. Humans are the worse monsters, because they appear so normal

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[info]woman_of_
2005-12-18 10:36 am UTC (link)
Caught up. Wonderful, two big bads, hope Spike can help Xander heal. I am sure he would be a wonderful listener, and not freak like the girls might. Hope you update soon

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[info]ex_kyrieane267
2005-12-18 04:45 pm UTC (link)
Thank you very much! I'm very very glad you liked!

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[info]sparrow2000
2005-12-18 12:21 pm UTC (link)
Awesome to see more of this. Strangely enough I'd gone back and reread the first 3 parts just last week and was contemplating writing to ask if you were going to continue. Obviously the vulcan mind meld thing worked!
Thank you so much for updating, it's really great to see this back.

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[info]ex_kyrieane267
2005-12-18 04:46 pm UTC (link)
heeee!

Thanks! I'm glad you liked! I actually hope to finish this over Winter Break, but I'm not making any promises! :)

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[info]eithnex
2005-12-18 09:43 pm UTC (link)
I am so pleased to see more of this. I like the way Spike is handling Xander in this...letting him get on with patrol and such but still being there for when it gets to be too much. I look forward to more when you can.

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[info]kaysm95
2005-12-19 12:35 am UTC (link)
OK, I haven't read it yet, but had to come pet you for writing more! Yay!

I'm going to read now...

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[info]kaysm95
2005-12-19 04:46 pm UTC (link)
Wow! This is still so good. So glad to see more of it. I had been checking for updates regularly and had almost given up hope!

Just one thing - how did Spike not know he was invited in? Hadn't he just curled up in the warm spot in Xander's bed just before Xan went to the Magic Box and invited himself along?

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2,3&4
[info]tsavoritegarnet
2005-12-19 06:02 am UTC (link)
I stayed up all night reading. Now I'm waiting to see where you go next. Poor Xander needing people to pay attention to him, somehow, but instead getting ignored or fussed about. *sigh* Spike's better, but it sounds like Angel had the best idea of what was up.

It reads great now. I'm looking forward to the next update.

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[info]nashmaveric
2005-12-19 06:53 am UTC (link)
OMG you're breaking my heart there! More? Please? ::puppy eyes::

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[info]angstpuppy
2005-12-19 02:26 pm UTC (link)
I remember reading part one of this ages ago, and then the next part. And now having read it all again, including the rewrite...I'm still all agog. I was always amazed at the "soul=good" equation. In what reality?
That Xander survived what was done to him at all was a miracle. That he is sane enough to function is another. Out of all the scoobies I think he and Giles are the only ones that could have. The sunnydale gang doesn't know what to do, not that that is an excuse, but I see it as the reason that they aren't around much. I think that the reason the LA gang and Spike can help more is that Wesley has been there, because of his father, Spike has been there because of Angelus and Angel knows it from the torturer's point of view. He knows, or can imagine what was done and can realize that while Xander's body is healed/healing his psyche has wounds that must be cleansed to heal. Oh, look't me going on and on. I just think you are doing an amazing job here and look forward to you continuing.

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[info]humanoidmegg
2005-12-19 02:45 pm UTC (link)
Would you believe i was just thinking today that i *really* want to read a fic where one of the boys is badly traumatised and the whole story is about helping him sort himself out. Then got online and whadya know?!? Its just what i felt like and you are doing a nice job of it so far :) I especially like the way you aren't rushing it, to have xan "all fixed up everything fine" in a week or two. Slow is definitely of the good :)
Really looking forward to more!

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(Anonymous)
2005-12-20 12:28 am UTC (link)
What a surprise (and treat) to see this updated! Man, I had hoped and hoped this would not be another great story I get hooked on only to see it languish unfinished. Please continue this to the end. Great work, very apppreciated.

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Part 4
[info]fanficfan
2005-12-22 07:26 am UTC (link)
Was taken by the first part of this when it appeared. Think you have developed this in gripping ways and hope you will continue and complete the story.

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[info]1more_sickpuppy
2006-02-18 06:41 pm UTC (link)
Hey! Pet, pet, chew, chew.
Petting for writing this gorgeous hunka story (the name is 'When the angels wept' right?), chewing to make you write more. It's been 2 months, you really need to keep it up...
One thing I didn't get was Spike thinking he wasn't invited into Xander's apartment. I thought he'd already been in there sleeping in the 'still warm bed'?
So, go produce! Pretty please?

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More please
[info]amberlina23
2006-02-22 01:43 am UTC (link)
Just re-read this beautiful story. Please, please write more... Love it!

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when the angels wept
(Anonymous)
2007-03-05 03:58 am UTC (link)
you left me on the edge of my chair.
have pity and write more soon!!

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